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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>The people that a student can get in touch with are not very various which means that students may communicate with merely their  parents,teachers and friends.In this situation,some people hold the point that students are influenced more by their teachers rather than their friends.Conversely,I think that students can be affected more by their friends instead of their teachers.And the following are my arguments.
First of all,students usually take more time get in touch with their friends instead of their teachers.So,friendship is a more important influencing factor.For example,students are all willing to let their friends to do daily activities with themselves like playing games,chatting,having dinner,etc. instead of their teachers even their parents.
Secondly,students usually dare to share their secrets and thoughts with peers.However,when facing adults like their teachers,students are usually not willing to do the same things.So rather than teachers,friends can cause deeper effect on a student.Taking myself as an example,as a student,I am always willing to share my secrets and thoughts with my friends instead of my teachers so that there are only friends here to help solve my problems and affect me greatly.
In addition,because of the existence of generation gap,there is a great distinguish in thinking between generation and generation.The student\\\'s way of thinking,horizon,criterion and so on are definitely different from that of adults\\\'.For example,the last generation of chinese hold the traditional thought that children must obey their parents and do whatever they ask to do.However,the young generation do not agree it at all and think that it is their natural right to have free.So in this situation it is impossible that a teacher of a student can do better than his friends on affecting himself.
In a word,as far as I am concerned,rather than teachers,friendship is closer to a student and can make a greater influence on him.  


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