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Question:<p>Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork, which of the two approaches do you prefer? </p><p></p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>  Occupying time on doing extra study related to the schoolwork to enhance the comprehensively understanding upon the knowledge obtained from school is of great beneficial. Nevertheless, playing games or sports offer them some more important things such as skills or energy that could not get from study. From my perspective, playing is not a waste of time, but a plausible approach to speed up the teaching and learning process.
  Being engaged in playing no matter sports or games is the inherited ability for children to relax and relief the massive stress from the studying. Continuous and exceeding learning, though giving sufficient knowledge, makes the atmosphere full of stress and tiresome at best and let students more likely to be fed of studying and acquiring mew things at worse. For the sake of refreshing the mind, proper amount of playing is prerequisite for the efficient learning in the next term. As the common sense, maintaining a dynamic mental condition as well as a healthy build is much more indispensable for the children to further their academic study.
   Additionally, due to the absence of the accompany with their parents, children would feel lonely and abandoned, which severely cause some psychological obstacles to communicate with others, confidently and fluently. Considering playing with other children, this problem can be coped with readily. Meanwhile, some team sports also cultivate the cooperating spirits and the thoughts of caring others. The sense of the individual in a group will also give he or her the sense of responsibility, which in return he or she would understand the parents tiresome and hardworking to foster he or she growth up.  Moreover, mastering a game or some sports promotes a student confidence and existance in the class, which gives an essential support on the mental pattern.
   The knowledge in the books is scientific and without doubts, however, in the field of games or sports, you can modify many kings of methods to deal with the difficulties happened accidentally. It stimulates the key ability to be flexible and calm when individuals face with the obstacles in their way to success. It is undoubled that no one can live a smooth life forever, hence, it is vital to get ready to face any trouble bravely in the lifelong.
  In conclusion, playing sports or games has more positive effects on the growing up children without the accompaniment of parents.
  



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