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Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure everything is correct.

Time and tide waits for no man. No matterwhat people is engaged in, it is obvious that being punctual is their primarygoal. To some extent, high speed might cause some mistakes, but that does notmean people can not work with both efficiency and high quality. From myperspective, however, making less mistake is as important as having a quickprocess.
   In the first place, once a task is initiated, every second should bemade full use of. Any delay may lead to severe and fatal consequence.Apparently, save time and take less mistake is the key to make sure that yourtask could be done successfully. Take the GIGN team as an example, the mostfamous incident they deal with must be the airline hijacking event in 1994.Over 100 passengers were controlled as hostages the GIGN team needto deploy a precise and rapidly action to keep the hostages secure, and todisarm the terrorists. Fortunately, the entire action had a tremendous succeed,which made the GIGN team get approved by all over the world. No hostages werekilled in this assault, and all the threaten were eliminated. This example     completely proved that time and qualitycan be ensured at the same time.
   Secondly, there is no necessary to fear making mistakes. Certainly,making mistakes could let people keep humble and learn from the past, which canavoid doing the same in the future effectively. If there is no mistake aremade, how can a person have opportunities to look back and improve himself?Thomas Edison, who successfully find the most suitable material to make  electric light bulbs with thousands ofexperiments, tell us that making mistakes is only a forerunner to success. Asyou can see, although making mistakes can not be completely avoided, thekeypoint to us is whether we can use it to figure out our shortcomings.
    To sum up, during the course of a task,people should attach great importance to both speed and quality in their plans.Consequently, even though may be encounters with  faults and risks,we should pay our attention to the whole task and prepare to react to all availableproblems. Bear in mind, like the SAS said, who dares wins.

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