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   The passage puts forwardthree hypotheses to explain the decline of the yellow cedars. However, thespeaker in the lecture totally refutes the ideas in the passage by stating thatnone of the hypotheses is adequate to explain the decreasing. He mentions threepoints as followed.
   Firstly, the speaker says that the yellowcedar is much more resistant to the insects than any other species of trees.The tree itself is toxic to the beetles, and the beetles' larvae that eat thewood will be damaged and become dead anyway. Therefore, the yellow cedar cannotbe suffered from the beetles. This is the opposite position of the opinion inthe passage that the insect is the main factor cause the decline of the trees.
   Secondly, in the lecture, the speaker admitsthat brown bears do ruin some of the trees, but the yellow cedars are bothwidely spread in the mainland and island. There are no bears live in the islandwhereas the trees in the island still dwindle. The population of the treesdecrease without the bear has completely contradicts to the idea in the readingpassage that the brown bears are to blame for the reducing of the trees.
   Finally, the speaker does not agree with theargument carried in the passage that the freezing damage is the main reason forthe trees' declining. He mentions that although the root system may getvulnerable due to the coldness, the evidence shows that the trees grown in thelower level where the climate is warmer died more than the trees in higheraltitude where the climate is colder. It does not make sence because the colderclimate did not cause more death of the trees. So clearly the change of theclimate is not the reason attribute to the decreasing of the trees.

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