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发表于 2018-4-30 22:01 |显示全部楼层
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While some countries see the increase of people's weight, their levels of health and fitness are confronted with decrease on the contrary. Some key factors result in these problems and some measures are supposed to be taken.

From my perspective, there are two main causes leading to the dilemma. For one thing, the diet has been hugely changed in recent decades, because of the rapid development of technology which contributes to lower cost of food, especially meat. People eat more meat than before, and cut down the share of vegetables they have. For another, an increasing number of people exercise less and choose to live sedentary lives, so obesity and weak conditions hit modern citizens more often. For example, once I kept watching TV as well as eating snacks for a whole day, the next day when I had to get up early to have classes, I felt dizzy and could not concentrate on my study.

To tackle these far-reaching problems, effective measures should be taken. Firstly, we individuals are supposed to keep the balance of diet, trying to eat more vegetables and less meat. On no account can we ignore the importance of eating vegetables and fruits. Secondly, less junk food should be taken and government should regulate it mmore strictly. Thirdly, apart from focusing on what we eat, we may pay more attention to how we exercise in daily life. There is no doubt that doing some sports helps us build better physical condition.

In conclusion, to change this situation, not only should we eat more healthily, but we should also exercise more often.

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