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发表于 2018-5-2 18:37 |显示全部楼层
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Many museums and historic sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is it the case? What can be done to attract local people?

An increasing number of people spend their time visiting places of interest for vacation, and most of famous sites are visited by people from other cities instead of local residents.

Personally, the most immediate reason responsible for lacking of local visitors is that they are familiar with their local culture and feel bored with local museums and famous sites, so they will not visit local places of interest. Most of local people had learned their traditional culture at school, and have more chance to experience it than tourists. As a result, local residents will not feel excited and curiosity as tourists when they visit famous spots, and many of local people are unwilling to choose places of interests in their cities or towns.

Another possible cause is that local people do not want to pay the tickets in local spots, and they prefer to go sightseeing in other cities. Residents consider that they pay tax to the local government every years. This represents their contribution to the local society, so it is unfair for them to pay tickets again. Instead, local people would rather visit sites in other towns.

To combat this situation, government can offer concession to local people such as discount. Parents may be willing to visit local spots with their children because of the low price, and it is likely to turn local spots into popular places for residents. In addition, local museums and historic sites should hold more activities and organize exhibitions especially in typical festivals. Local people may have new feelings which improve the enthusiasm of local spots .

To summarize, it is vital to understand that lacking of local residents in spots is principally caused by their experience and the tickets price. Therefore, I believe in order to solve the problem, we need to cut the price of the tickets and organize more activities.



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发表于 2018-5-20 08:34 |显示全部楼层
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