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发表于 2018-5-4 17:33 |显示全部楼层
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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

     For improving the transportation peopleoften use in daily life, opinions vary from person to person. Some hold thatit’s necessary to build more railway routes between cities while othersconsider that enhancing existing public transport is of great significance.From my perspective, it will bring more benefits if we do create new lines fortrains.

     Some advocates of adding more new railwayroutes may believe that more lines mean more choices for people to choose whichone they prefer to take. Owing to the convenience of high-speed trains, anincreasing number of people would like to take them for a trip or business. Peoplemight, therefore, encounter the deficiencies of tickets before holidays for toomany people want to go back home or travel to another city. A great example toillustrate that is China’s Spring Festival travel rush when thousands of peoplehave difficulty buying train tickets. Increasing the railway routes can greatlyenrich the train tickets and ensure that most people can choose one out oftheir preference.

     However, opponents of the mentioned ideamight reckon that improvement of the existing transport can reduce traffic jamand pollution within cities. Citizens usually use public transport, such asbuses, subways and shared bikes more often in the daily life. The quality ofthose transport exerts great impact on citizens’ life standards. If thegovernment can optimize the city roads for buses or adding new routes forsubways, this may play an important role in mitigating traffic congestionduring the rush hour.

     According to my view, the construction ofnew route for high-speed trains can boost the economy in different cities andenhance the cultural exchange. Trade between cities can be realized better byconstant and efficient fast trains. Individuals can earn more money on theeconomic frequent economic activity. Thus, I hold that it will do more good todevelop new routes for trains.

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发表于 2018-5-6 16:20 |显示全部楼层
老师驾到,批改中。。。。。。。
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发表于 2018-5-6 16:44 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2018-5-6 17:12 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2018-5-16 22:12 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2018-5-19 22:36 |显示全部楼层
--------------你们都是怎么写出这么好的我感觉要挂了好害怕啊怎么办啊
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