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During a school year, high school students should be required to learn many different subjects, others think they should concentrate on three or four subjects.
In modern day life, the burdens of students are getting heavier as parents entrust their hopes on their kids. Therefore, high school became a period of serious effort for students. As a result, many adults believe high schoolers should be only required to take three or four subjects of their interest, while others suggest high schoolers to participate in seven or eight subjects. From my perpective, it is necessary for high school kids to take part in seven or eight courses because high school students might still be pondering on what to do in the future and some basic studies in regions that students are not specializing in should be necessary.

First of all, high school students might still be deciding of what they are going to do in the future. Which, in this case, will create trouble for those that are not sure of their future lives to make such an crucial decision, which could affect their who life, at an early age of 15. For instance, take my bigger sister as an example, who is an undergraduate in a chinese high school. Just like many of her friends, when she had to make the choice of what she want to do in her future life ,when she was 15 years old, my sister was confused about her dreams. This caused her to panic to a point where she does not want to eat anything. As a result of not being mature enough to decide, my sister, made a wrong choice, which caused her to be unable to study history. Therefore, I believe it is necessary for high schools to make every subject compulsury since students might not be able to make dicisions.

Moreover, learning all subjects in high school also fulfill students’ basic needs in future life. Since even if a student later specializes in some areas, it is still important for them to a enough knowledge of a subject for future usage. For example, my little cousin who is a nerd in english literature still knows everything about how our body functions. This is a result from learning every single subject during his high school years.On the other hand, if students did not participate in all courses during their high school time,they would make awkward mistakes because they don’t have the basic living skills. For instance, I didn’t have the opportunity to learn all the courses in high school, which resulted me to not have enough on othe subjects such as geography. This resulted in my friends laughging at me for confusing North America with South America, which also made me feel dumb. Therefore, I think it would be a better choice to learn all subjects in high because this is the only way to gain all basic knowledge.

In a nutshell, I believe it is necessary for every high school to make all the courses compusury because students should not have to make a crucial decision on their life at such a young age, and students will gain all their basic knowledge this way.

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