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发表于 2018-5-10 18:20 |显示全部楼层
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Task 2
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?



There are an increasing number of advertisements which reduce the typical personality of each people. I agree that these advertising can have a damaging effect on making themselves look different, although some advertising may not affect them.

Advertisements are possibly able to encourage people from being similar, since people imitate the behaviour of the advertising spokesperson. Some celebrities play roles in advertisements. And a large amount of individuals will imitate their own idols because people regard those well-known person as models. As a result, the public will behave the same and lose their characters.

Another reason is that people will chase the tide from the advertisements which reduce their typical features. People can learn some fashion information from advertisements anywhere such as the internet, televisions and even bus stations. They hope to become fashion, so most of them will receive the up-to date fashion style. In a long run, they will be assimilated into each other.

On the other hand, advertising may help people have a better understanding of the products they choose, so people will not be similar to others. People are able to receive information from advertisements, which may help them realize the advantages and the disadvantages of the products they prepare to select. In this way, they are possibly not able to behave the same if they choose the most suitable things instead of the latest ones.

In conclusion,  I would argue that advertisements can also encourage people to become similar to others, although advertising may play a role in some cases.

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