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Today, advancedscience and technology have made great changes to people's life, but artistssuch as musicians, painters and writers are still highly valued. What can artstell us about life that science and technology cannot?
In modernsociety, innovative technologies have a great influence on citizens' life andwork. However, arts are indispensable for people's wellbeing.

According to a famous theory published by a psychologist,there are five different categories of needs for humans, physical welfare suchas food and housing which are in the first place. By adopting advancedtechnologies, most of the basic needs can be met. Fox example, geneticallymodified food can provide for people in poor areas in developing countries. Onlywhen starvation and housing are no longer issues of concern will the secondtypes of needs emerge, which refer to mental demands like emotionalsatisfaction. At this stage, arts play an important role. Music composed bymusicians can release the pressure and lessen the burden imposed on citizens. APainting can stimulate people different kinds of imagination toward thefeelings that the painter wants to express. A great book often leads people todifferent directions of lives, encouraging them to think about what is the truemeaning of our lives.

Furthermore, arts help one find a way to expressone's love. As a species, collectively, love is our emotional landscape. Improvingthe standard of life is the duty of a bread winner of one family, it is hard for a man who go out early in the morning and come home at nightonly in time to dress for dinner can feel happy. Arts can help one openthe gate of heart to embrace love from one’s family members. When parents comingat home, a simple song sang by their children will help them get off from theheavy workload for a moment and feel happy.
Inconclusion, science and technology provide the primary needs for humans whereasarts are essential for their emotional wellbeing. Without arts, human lifewould be reduced to a colorless existence or even to nothingness.

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