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Many people think cheap air travel should beencouraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further. However,others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be moreexpensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views andgive your own opinion.


Some people, worrying about the prevalence ofair travel ‘s detrimental effects, make a strenuous effort to discourage therelative poor from taking advantage of it. However, i insist that travelling byairplane could provide tremendous convenience for all citizens.
Cheaper tickets can offer people of ordinaryeconomic backgrounds opportunities to travel by air. For some college students,air freight of discount could offer them opportunities to go abroad to experienceforeign culture and education during summer and winter holiday which will stand them in good stead when they need to compete with their counterparts from advantageous backgrounds. For new married couples of modest income could go to a faraway and beautiful island to enjoy their honeymoons which would enhancetheir emotional wellbeing and improve the tourism in local countries. The prevalenceof travelling by plane brings it home to people that technological breakthroughsare the harbinger of social equality and social prosperity.

Some people may argue that pollution generated by air travelwould imposed a heavy burden on the earth. The emission of greenhouse gasproduced by fossil oil during air travels escalates the climbing oftemperature, making winter warmer and summer hotter. However, one airplane cancarry many more passengers than a private car, and the average consumption ofenergy for each passenger may be much less. Instead of exacerbating pollution problems, it, on thecontrary, allays itsmagnitude. Furthermore, scientists could endeavor to search for advancedtechnologies to produce environmentally friendly energy to replace fossil oilused by airplane.


To conclude, only when the rich and the poor areboth entitled to the same privileges in their travels can the society enjoy ahigher likelihood of stability and progress.

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thak you for evaluation. .v
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发表于 2018-5-16 21:02 |显示全部楼层
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