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For encouraging the children to get high grade, some parents try to make a connection with pocket money and high grade for the school-age children, which sounds like a food lure and experimental animals in the conditioning experiment. However, I totally disagree with this actions.

First, students need to learn a fact that learning is a self-accountability and life-long lasting process, not an accomplishment assined by parents or schools. Parents and schools need to help students build a correct perespective to their study. As we all need to go to college, and then go to workplace. The more prepared we make, the more knowlege we attain, the smoother we feel when we work. If the students feel like there is a connection between their grade with how many money the can get from their parents, it will give them the awareness that learning is not for their own, it has other purposes. Take me as an example, my mom gives me same amount of money at every first week of each semester, no matter how high or how low my grade is. She wants to build my money management sense, not monitoring my learning status, and my grade is not effected by how many money I get.

Second, offering money to students can not help the students to get higher grade indeed. Parents and school have the responsibilites to help build a heathy consciousness to learning for the students. Student will learn to compete with other peers by how many money they get from parents, which will have bad affect to the student psychological development. My cousin is a child who are always refused to do homework, my uncle tried to buy him the toy he wants to motivate him to do homework. At the first week, my cousin did the homework every day to get the toy, but things got worse later, he kept requiring for another one more toy for the next week, otherwise he doesn't do the homework. This is a tipical example to show how bad effect it may produce from the suggestion.

Thirdly, students can get money by more reasonable ways, instead of from grading performance. There are many society activities and part-time jobs for students, they can attend a volunteer activity, providing their spare time and labor, helping others. Also, they can apply for a part-time job or intership from school or company, through this way students can get money and build up work ability, which have benifit for their further study and work performance. Our shcool hosted a students' drawing exhibit last week, students' art work were being posted on the hall walls, and our school invited a post card company to visit and evalutate these drawings, they selected some of the drawing and make them into post cards for sale, by this students got money from it. It's a seccussful activity, the student earns money from their work and talent, and the company gets idea and artwork from students.

In conclusion of the above, I understand some parents'  purpose of promoting their children to get higher grade by giving their money, however, I think this behavior needs to be reconsidered for parents.

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