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Schools should teach children some academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with opinion?

I agree with the statement that schools should teach students academic courses which will benefit their careers in the future, but I do also believe that other subjects like arts and sports are essential for their wellbeing.

I strongly suggest schools should give priority to academic teaching. Nowadays, qualifications achieved from colleges are demanded by almost every companies if one desires to secure a decent position. University must make a strenuous effort to inculcate the next generation with qualities like intelligence and industry which will stand them in good stead when they are required to play the role of employees. For example, students who have a firm command of mathematical abilities could analyze financial models more easily as a staff in an investment company.

However, other subjects like arts and sports could provide young minds with opportunities to infuse themselves with abilities such as interpersonal skills and team work. Athlete events held by schools can get many students involved. Many sports like volleyball and badminton require team members to cooperate with each other in order to win the games. Regular exercise is a good way for students to stay healthy and concentrate on their studies. Furthermore, painting and music are very useful for young minds to lessen the heavy burden that academic study imposed on.

In conclusion, schools should make a scientific balance between academic study and other subjects. Only when the combination is arranged properly can students enjoy a higher likelihood of happy life.

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