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Some people thinkthat introducing some new technologies can improve people’s life quality in thedeveloping countries. However, others believe that free education should beoffered. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


Some people havedifferent views about how to improve citizens’ wellbeing in developingcountries. They are arguing about whether to offer free education to the nextgeneration or to bring in new technologies from abroad.


Some people holdthe view that young minds free exposure to academic study is the only way tofight against poverty and to lead a higher level of happy life in the future. Thequalifications achieved from colleges are an essential condition to a decentjob in modern societies. It is no doubt that schools can make a strenuous effortto inculcate students with qualities like industry and intelligence which willstand them in good stead when applying for a position. Only when governmentsplace funds in education will the heavy burden imposed on citizens from disadvantageousbackgrounds, to a large extent, be eased.


On the other hand,others insist that government should give priority to new technologies beingintroduced from foreign countries which have intimate connections with ourdaily life. Advanced technologies, such as cutting-edge medical equipment andconstructive strategies, are of vital use in improving citizen’s physicalwellbeing and economy. Many incurable diseases will be healed and more public infrastructurescould be built. People could have a higher likelihood of entertainment and convenience.


From my point ofview, governments should take both free education and advanced technologiesinto consideration, because they are not mutually exclusive to each other butequally essential to our human being.

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同学你好,作文已由写作王牌老师Caroline批改,结果如下:
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发表于 2018-5-23 15:38 |显示全部楼层
学习一下!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~~~~~~
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发表于 2018-5-23 16:24 |显示全部楼层
Caroline Xu 发表于 2018-5-23 15:19
同学你好,作文已由写作王牌老师Caroline批改,结果如下:
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谢谢老师辛苦批改,很有帮助。希望明天考试顺利。
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