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Task 2:
Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the country, while others think it is better for them to grow up in the city.
Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that the place for growing up during childhood is important for the development of an individual. Living in rural or urban area provides different living conditions for raising up a child. There are both advantages and disadvantages to grow up in these areas.

In contryside, youths can enjoy various pros, which are brought by natural environment and government planning. As less building and less crowdy at surrounding, there is no pollution and splendid sceneries. The youngsters can have a large area for ourdoor activities, which could made them more energetic and healthier. Also, there are usually less famous schools, which the students are less competitive. The school could provide more freedom and less limitation for them to develop creative, dynamic and out-going characteristics. However, job opportunities are narrow in there. If children cannot compete with those in city in furture, they would be hardly survived.

On the other hand, juniors in the densely populated area are benefited by the habitats of city. As there are more peers at same ages, they are more likely to become sociable. The choices of education are numerous to fulfil the high population, which provide options to select base on strengths of an individual. In addition, with advanced technology development, teenagers can contact with multiple aspects of knowledge easily. They have access to huge amount of information by using the Internet. However, many stress has been given to youngsters, which want them to meet the social standard. If they are overpressure, they would get mental illnesses.

In conclusion, I think suburb is more suburb is more suitable for early age which is before school. Boys and girls can build up a healthy body at that range of time. If I was the parent, I would give them to choose which kind of institution they want to stay in.

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