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Competitivenessis a positive quality for people to have among most society. How does thiscompetitiveness affect individuals? Do you think it is a positive or negativetrend?
Itis demanded of every individuals to make a strenuous effort to inculcatethemselves with the quality of competitiveness in this increasingly competitivesociety, because competitiveness is an essential quality for citizens to lead ahigh standard of lives. In my opinion, individuals secure competitiveness is apositive phenomenon.
Competitivenessis an indispensable character for people to enjoy a happier life. Citizens arenow under great pressures because of high living cost in modern societies, thehigh price of residential houses, the food and tuition fee for young minds arethree huge mountains lay on their shoulders. They must have great determinationto succeed in applying a university with reputation, and then a decent job witha higher payment. Only when they can compete with their counterparts can theyhave abilities to cover their expenditures in daily lives.
Frommy point view, competitiveness is of paramount importance to the development ofindividuals as well as countries. With it, people can get a promotion in theircareers more easily. What is more, human resources in a key point to thedevelopment of a company. Employees with professional knowledge are more likelyto manager projects well, increasing profits companies, then enhance theeconomy of a country.
Inconclusion, to be competitiveness is an effective path to a higher likelihoodof delightful life for individuals. Competitiveness is analogous to a key; withit, one could open the gate that leads to a brighter future.

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