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发表于 2018-5-14 21:12 |显示全部楼层
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Romans supposed to attack the port city of greek over 2,200 years ago. Nowadays, there comes a saying that the greek use a mistry weapon named "burning mirror". The mirror was used to focus the Sun's rays onto Roman ships to catch fire. But now we have 3 reasons to prove that it's just a myth that Greeks never used it in that war.
In primary, The article said that the technologically advanced enough to make such a device.The "burning mirror" should be several meters wide and have a accurate curve to burning the ship correctly. But the technic of polish the copper is not exist in the world.
Next to that, the "burning mirror" needs a long time from set it to burning the ship, at least ten minutes.Whats more the mirror is forbidden to move.But the ship of Romans is 30 meters away of greeks, and they will not keep in position without using any of the waterproofs.
Last,the greeks had already have a flaming arrows, it can shoot the enemy. it was useless for them to waste time to build another weapon.

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