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发表于 2018-5-14 21:49 |显示全部楼层
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Do you agree or disagree the following statement.
Young people today have no influence on theimportant decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Nowadays, the influence of young people to the society has been discussfor a long time. Some people think young people are the future of the societyand their decisions really matter, others argue that there is no influence onimportant decisions. For me, I hold the opinion that young people today do haveno influence which determine the future of society.
First of all, young people has no time to make such decisions which canaffect the society. Young people have to face their hard work and the realityof taking care of their children and old parents. Take my friend Yang as anexample. After graduating from school he take a job in the local restaurant. Withthe limit salary he has to save each coin to keep his life. He always tell methat after his work he only wants to back to his apartment and lays on his bedrest. With such a condition, it’s no doubt that young people has no time todetermine the future of society.
Besides, the youth do not have much experience as old people. Todeal with many difficulties and dilemmas, it is especially need experience. Lastweek in my community some young people in the council set up a plan to build a gardenin front of my apartment, however they cannot convince many neighbors. Finallythe old people talked to those neighbors who against the decision and made theplan go well. Even such a small thing in community youths cannot figure out,how we can trust they can complete the future important decisions?
Admittedly, young people have more creations and they will not belimited by the old fashion. In the society they have to follow rules which havealready been there. Their duties are not to change the rules. The people whocan adapt the environment will survive. The important decisions whichdetermined the society were hold by the whole people in the society, not only youngpeople.
As a result, youth are too young and too naive to operate or determinethe future, and their influence can be ignored.

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