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Nowadays, more and more jobs and task are done by machines which involve hard physical work. Do these effects of this trend outweigh the negative effects?
With the rapid development of technology and science, manpower has gradually given ways to machines which make it possible to accomplish arduous tasks that are difficult for human beings to deal with even in a more effective way. It is widely acknowledged as an irreversible trend and I think the positive effects of this phenomenon definitely outweigh the negatives.
The industrial revolution brought numerous machines to the world which have step by step participated in the manufacturing process and even got highly associated with people’s daily lives. The whole century witnessed the benefits evoked by the advent of machines, it has been promoting the economical growth exponentially. Workers were thus saved from endless physical work routine and appalling standard of working environment. Moreover, the inventions of vacuum cleaners, washing machines and all those household appliances have completely changed the lifestyle of modern people, most importantly, saved us a lot of time.
The negative effects can be seen in the decline of employment rate. On one hand, mechanization has contributed to the transformation from workshop&handicraft industry to machine industry. On the other hand, it meant that machines had taken the places used to belong to the workers and consequently resulted in the mass redundancy. In addition, the popularization of machines would possibly increase the consumption on energy resources. However, It is not impossible to tackle these issues if certain measures are taken. For example,job opportunities can be created in some potential but unexplored areas and Resources can be economized by designing energy efficient machines.
To sum up, the benefits of the use of machines are enormous even along with some negative factors. But I am quite certain that these adverse impacts can be eliminated with efforts.

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