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Regarding to the particularly high taxes for cigarette smokers required by many countries, the reading puts forward three reasons to support it. Yet, all of them are contradicted by the listening with the following illustrations.
First of all, in the author’s point of view, the taxes on cigarette are favorable to stop some person’s unhealthy behaviors. They can force cigarette smokers to consume fewer of cigarette. On the other hand, the listening argues that it is not effective to raise the taxes because it would make smokers buy cheaper and lower quality cigarette which contains more harmful components. Similarly, consumers might continue buying unhealthy food though they are supposed to pay high taxes for them. It is obvious that high taxes cannot prevent them from smoking, and as a consequence, they have less money to spend on healthy foods, which is not beneficial to their health.
Besides this, when it comes to financial fairness created by the high taxes, the listening is totally in disagreement with this point in the reading. The listening states that the high taxes do not consider the income between different people. With high taxes on cigarettes, the poor have to bear much great burden.
Finally, the last point raised by the reading material is that high taxes on cigarette can raise revenue for the government. With these money, the government is able to build some public welfare, including parks or stadiums. This is also refuted by the listening which mentions that it is some much money that might make the government depend on it and don’t want to lose it. In consequence, it caused that the government would not be forceful enough pursing policies and laws which are favorable to eliminate unhealthy habits. For instance, they are unlikely to adopt radical measures such as abandoning smoking in public areas.

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