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Job choice is a hard work to many of us, beacause there are a lot of choices in vary of conditions.If I am facing that choice,I will definitely decide the long time working patten The reasons are as follows.

Firstly, Long time work makes work more effective.  For many people who are obliged to solving a problem which costs long time to slove it., eight hours working is not always guaranteed to get a satisfied result.If the work time extend to to 12 hours per day, It will become a highly possible for them to finish that.Here comes a problem, one can work late to finish it, or he can quit at middle time and remain it to tommorow to finish it whether he will forget the good isperit of it.

Secondly, long time work in three days can make room for a short term trip or a training .For example, after three days' hard working , one can take his children for a trip to a travelling spot near his living place. Due to a enough rest,he can work more happily and effectively in his next 3 days. Either the benifits of the employee and of the employor are magnified to a high level reasoning to this long term working.

Last but most important, a  three day working is good for a company to arrange its employors' working more effectively. One week only can be  divided to one five-day working term, while it can be filled with two three-day working term and one rest. It mean the company can use twice of its previous employors and even idicated that the company can make nearly twice of its profits in a same period. That is definitely a brave and wise improvement.

Frankly speaking, the long-term working will make people be more exhausted and fall in a bigger bother everyday. NEvertheless, looking from the whole people,this working term is better for most of them. No matter the employee and the employor can achive a content result.In my point of view, that's an improvement of great advantage for the whole society anf country.

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发表于 2018-5-22 14:34 |显示全部楼层
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