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Question:Some people think that older children should be required to take care of the younger children. Others think that this should be done by parents or other adults. Which do you prefer ?
Some families have two or more kids, it is really a problem for them if parents have no time to take care of the children. Some people believe that parents can ask older children for help to take care of the younger children while others think that it is better to let parents and other adults to take care of the children. By considering both their merits and shortcomings, I prefer to let older children take care of the younger children。

To consider roughly, parents or other adults are responsible for taking care of the children, and they are experienced, which means they could bring their children a safe and happy life. However, to consider it in a more comprehensive way, it is stressed out for parents to take care of all their children. But if the older children could help take care of younger child, they can not only relieve their parents’ stress, but also gain some merits for themselves.

It goes without saying that there are plenty merits to let older children take care of younger children. For older children, it is useful to help them learn about their family and establish good relationships with their younger family members. For younger children, they will have a sweet memory with their siblings in their childhood, which is beneficial for them to build a good characteristic. For parents, it is beyond argument that they can focus on their daily work and don't get distracted.

In addition, older children can establish responsbilities and get some useful skills to face future life. For example, when i was 15 years old, my sister was only 10 years old, and my parents were really busy with going abroad for work. As a result, I took care of my sister in the daily life. I made breakfasts for her, and we went to school together. When she has problems, I help her to solve them. So, I am really good at household and I know a lot useful skills to live a healthy and comfortable life. I really benefit from this experience. Now I live alone in the university, and I can handle any kind of problem and live a independent life.

In a nutshell, older children take care of younger children is really a good choice for some busy family. As a result, all family members could benefit from this decision.

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