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Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.



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To have fun or to gain knowledge: That is the question. We all desire our children to be smart and successful in the future. And we want them to own happy childhood as well. Personally speaking, I prefer spending our time on more schoolwork.

To begin with, it is without saying that education is the most important task in the youth's life. Being a child and a student at the same time, it is important to have a happy life while being a responsible person to finish their own assigned knowledge. For instance, when a six-grader who only thought of playing outside with his classmate and neglecting all his homework, his very own future is in danger. It is their parents' duty to teach their siblings about the priority of play and learn. Therefore, spend more time on schoolwork do no harm but guaranteed those naive kids a better future.

Secondly, having more study works can be equally fun with having sports outside. The teaching materials nowadays are really voracious and magnified by technology. There are all kinds of responsive media that attract both kids and adults in some certain fields of wisdom. Make the kids programming platform - Scratch as an example. The programming interface allows kids to design their own motion and, therefore, create their own story by using codes of logic. It is fun and educational simultaneously. In addition, the sports activities can be treated as the bonus event after the learning program so that no unbalanced circumstances would happen.

Admittedly, people who consider children's work-life balance would argue that they already have a full day course in the school and all they need is more time with their beloved parents outdoor. However, in the modern days, the teachers in school sometimes cannot do their job responsibly, allowing the kids only to fool around and learning nothing instead of the core knowledge. Furthermore, there's actually no way that the parents can learn the situation before the wasted time of school days grows too long to make no harm. In other words, it is essential for parents to understand how their children learn and how should they suggest the teacher improve and cooperate with them. After all, the kids future is limitless, if the education is not taken lightly.

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