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发表于 2018-5-17 10:18 |显示全部楼层
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


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Teachers are the ones who educate students, cultivate their knowledge base in certain fields and tell them right from wrong. Nowadays, some people find that teachers are no longer being respected by society, rather, they are just like workers in the school. However, in my opinion, they are still being valued.

Firstly, someone argues that in the past students need a special ritual to eventually get their teachers and this ritual exactly shows the respect for teachers. But now all we need to do is only pay the tuition fee to schools. That's why they think teachers no longer appreciated by the society. Instead, I consider Teachers' Day as another form of ritual. When celebrating the Teachers' Day every year, we give thanks to all the teachers for what they've done in the past year. On Teachers' Day, not only students but all the people will do something to relief teachers. For example, last Teachers' Day, my uncle, a taxi driver, drive teachers home for free to express his special thanks. I also remember that television, radio station, even advertisement on the roads, show the celebration words.

Secondly, many people have a misunderstanding to judge the status of one career by salary. In the past, teachers are the ones who have earned a lot, while today they earn fewer than many people in society, like merchants, scientists, and technicians. So they consider teachers' status is declined. I strongly disagree with this idea. In the past, we have a few jobs, and teachers although they are important, their contribution is obviously less than scientists and merchants, so their salary is reasonable. And judging the status of a career only by salary is flawless. We should respect every job for they are all necessary. Without every one job, the society may not run smoothly.

In conclusion, the teacher is still a respectable job in our society for the Teachers' Day and reasonable salary.


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老师,我才发现原来我存在那么多问题,还好您给我一一指出,我再回过头去看一些范文的时候就知道他们好在哪里了
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