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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.

    Currently, we students are going to graduate from schools. The adaptionof society comes to be the first priority of us. Here comes the argument,whether it is the best way that parents help their teenager prepare for adultlife is to encourage them to take part-time job. I do agree the statement withthe following reasons.
    First of all, there's no doubt that part-time job helps us earn money.Working makes the teenager acknowledge more about the significance of money,especially in adult world. Take my friend Yang as an example. During hisuniversity days he finds a part-time job in a restaurant washing dishes. Heused be a man who spent much money on his video games. After working about amonth, he cuts the cost of entertainment. He told me he recognized the hardshipas an adult earning money by himself. It is really helpful for him to preparefor adult life.
    Furthermore, part-time job helps teenagers get more social experienceand personal development. With the communication and dealing with other adults atwork, they may know lots of roles about our society. My classmate Lee works asan assistant in an open lab. He works with many people out of our universityand it really let him know about the complex rules such as respective andcritical, which would not appear in college life. Now he get an offer in a bigcompany lab because of the experience in the open lab.
   Admittedly, although in some area it is cruel, with the help of theirparents they can find a safe part-time job and avoid the vulnerable work.Besides, the experience and skills they learn in part-time job can protect thembetter rather than let them face the cruel society directly.
    As a conclusion, I suggest every teenagers take a pat-time job as apreparation for adult life with the supervision of their parents. It is the best way to get access the adult world in a safe and appropriate condition.

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