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TASK 2: IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING TEST
Education should be accessible to people ofall economic backgrounds. All levelsof education, from primary school to tertiary education should be free. To whatextent do you agree?
Education plays a very important role onour society, and all of us need to receive education, no matter what economicbackgrounds we have. In this case, it is better that all levels of education,from primary school to tertiary education should be free to everyone.

I have to admit that providing freeeducation may cost quite large amounts of money of our country, which causes abig financial burden. Since we are still living in a developing country, it isdifficult for our government to promote such a policy. Furthermore, some peoplehold the opinion that there is no need for everyone to receive tertiary educationbecause we lack enough suitable jobs for so many highly educated people.

However, providing all levels of free educationcan result in more benefits to our personal development. Nowadays, a lot of peoplehave strong desire for receiving education, especially higher education, sincethey believe that education helps them widen their horizon of knowledge andmaster learning methods. Under these circumstances, free education enablesstudents who come from deprived backgrounds and have difficulty paying tuitionfee to realize their desires.

In addition, providing all levels of freeeducation is a good move for our country. Now in the knowledge economy times,ways to improve the national scientific and cultural soft power plays a keyrole of enhancing comprehensive strength. Therefore, free education helpsimprove cultural and scientific quality of all the citizens, facilitatingnational development and social progress.

In conclusion, providing free education topeople of all economic backgrounds is a good move, which is able to satisfypeople’s desire of education and promote the development of national scienceand culture.



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Riel~Riel 发表于 2018-5-23 17:34
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