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Question: Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.

The article puts forward several arguments to support the migration hypothesis, while the listening part disagree with it by saying that those statements are not convincing enough.
Firstly, the reading material suggests that the edmontosaur\'s herbivirous diet means that they have to migrate south to make sure their food supply. While the listening material goes against that by pointing out that the temperature of North Slope at that time is much higher due to the continuous sunshines so that there is enough vegetation in the summer. Even in the winter, they could also feed on the abundedead vegetation.
Secondly, according to the passage, living in herds indicates that edmontosaurs are moving south. However, the lecturer oppose it by using the example of another species that lives in herbs without migration. She also suggests that herd living sometimes results from the protection demand instead of migration need.
Finally, though the article mentions that edmontosaurs have the physical capability to migrate for a long distance, the professors points out that jovernile could not have the same ability as the adult to suvive the migration process. Besides, it is impossible for those adult to migrate alone while leaving their offsprings behind without care.


Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries for university professors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


I agree with that there is a neccesity to propor pay for university professors\' work in order to shift the education quality.
For the first thing, salaries sent by the universities could help with the relieve of the professors\' financial burden. Thus, the efficency of the teaching as well as researching might be ensured. On the countrary, if professors are always concerning about their reality financial problems, or even has little money to feed their families, there must be little or no energy left for conducting the teaching work.
Secondly, the payment could also serves as a reward for praising the high work quality of the lecturers. Provided that lecturers have conducted excellent job in teaching university students and help them master a certain subjects with good understanding, it is worthwhile to give the lecturers a bonus, which in return boosts the upgoing atmosphere within all the teaching staffs in the university, motivates them to work harder on their educating tasks. Thus, a positive competitive cycle might be formed, which leads to the educational quality shift.
In addition, financial support from the university could cover the purchase of research and education equiments so that the tools that help with the leacture are provided to meet the needs of both professos and students. Therefore, great chances are that educational effects might be more significant with those supporting equipments.
Nevertheless, the university should pay attention to the sum of money they are to give, not only because it might brings an extra finance burden to the university, but also a consideration that over financial support might alter the professos\' original motivation from acadamy to economy. In conclusion, I recommanded that the salaries should be strictly regulated and all in highly transparency to ensure the justice.
To sum up, it is necessary of university to offer salaries to promote the education quality, only within proper regulations.


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