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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. </p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>Nowadays, there are enormous events happening everyday around the whole world. If we keep away from these news all the time, we will become out-dated. Therefore, in everyday, we should use our leisure time to grasp some latest news about the important events which maybe seem unrelated with our daily life but could lead profound influence in our future life.

First of all, people lived in modern society need keep pace with the development of the world and get themselves informed what is happening in other areas since it could influence our life in some ways indeed. The unfavorable business tendency in one country may be a single of a proceeding world economy crisis. So for people in other countries, especially businessmen, keeping an eye on latest economical trend is very imperative. They could apply immediate solutions to get rid of potential harmfulness to their companies. For example, in 2008, before the horrible economy crisis, my uncle, who bought the stake of a big international enterprise sold the stake in time after hearing some bad news about the global economy from the Internet. Thanks to his habit, grasping economy news everyday, he avoided huge lost.

Besides, holding an view on the international news and events also could provide good topics in conversations with others. As we all know, common interests and topics could give people more opportunities to communicate with others. After talking with each other many time, they could get more chance to make friends. For instance, I am interested in international politics and I usually participate some discussion groups about the world politics tendency. In one group, I met my best friend, Mary, who shares similar major and interest with me. Through in-depth communication, we find more common interests in other aspects, for example, we both want to go to the United States to study PHD, now we could study together and encourage each other in the way pursuing our dreams.

All in all, it is not only an interesting thing for people to know about the latest events and news around the world, but also could produce practical effect in our daily life and provide us more chances in our social life.



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发表于 2018-6-14 17:47 | 小站托福TPO客户端

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