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Question:Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea?In a rapidly developed society with a fast pace, children would be delighted when offered money as award to their high mark in the test to purchase what they have obsession with, such as comic books or computer games. While some people suggest it is a good way to erect impetus on children\\\'s study, others firmly believe that it could have a negative influence on children\\\'s economic habits. However, in my perspective, giving money according to children\\\'s performance in the tests is a nice decision.

First and foremost, rewarding money is a good impetus for children’s study. Nowadays, especially senior high school students, many children are under considerable study pressure from both their family or peer and themselves. Provided some money, children are able to buy what they want. In this case, taking advantage of money as the award of their high mark in the test, children could find a good way to get refreshed and energetic. Take myself as an example, when I was at the period preparing for the college entrance examination, I was virtually buried in innumerable homework and regular tests. Even if I almost stayed up late every night to study, my performance was radically worse than before. My mom promised that I would be offered money to by my favorite comic books, if I could get a high mark in the next test. With the encouragement of money, I just obtained the full mark in the test. Apparently, we could make it clear that offering money could be an impetus for children to encourage them to work hard.

Meanwhile, offering children money for the high mark in their tests is a practical opportunity for children to learn to manage the use of money. As you can see, management of money matters is an essential technique for one\\\'s life. It is the ability of using money rationally that erects a profound influence in our life. Suppose a child who has never manage more than ten thousand dollars. Once he had such a great amount of money, it is highly probable that he would spend money on computer games or other enjoyment. On the contrary, a child with regular offered money would know how to make full use of his money and that every coin is earned arduously. Offering children money not only is award of their high mark, but also establishes a consciousness in children that money is precious and needed to be treasured.

By and large, regardless of the truth that how much money is offered each time is an issue needed to be considered, on no account should we dismiss the upside of offering children money for their high mark.


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