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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>The ancient chinese philospher Confucious have said \\\"If a children\\\'s behavior is terrible. It must be his father\\\'s fault.\\\" The reason why I use this sentence is due to the fact that there are more and more parents are involved in their children\\\'s education. Therefore, it is sagacious to believe that parents regard their children\\\'s education as an important thing. This view is based on the following three specific points.
First, one of the crucial idea is that parents believe that if they involved more in children\\\'s education, their children could do better than before. Let me take my father for example. When I was very young, my father always taught me at my math and English homework. After his teaching, I could comprehend the confusing question which disturb me a lot. That is part of the reason why I could get good grades in the final exam. Hence, the example of my father demostrates my opinion that there are positive influence if parents get involved in children\\\'s education.
Meanwhile, another reason can seen by every person is that parents are not absolutly believe their children\\\'s teacher. In other words, they have their own attitude toward their children\\\'s education. For instance, one of the greatest chinese mathematician Zhexuan Tao, his mother realized that it is better to educate her son by herself which promote he to finish fundmantal math classes earlier a lot than any other children. Therefore, this give him more time to explores the mathematic ocean by himself. Thus, the example of Zhexuan Tao\\\'s mother illustrate the soundness of my contention that parents are not rely on teachers because of their own intellegence.
Admittedly, parents are more busy than before cause the fact that they have less time on their children. However, it is more common in our socity that one of a parents which is always the mother will quit their job to teach their children. For example, when the glamorous japanese actress Rie Yamauchi was married. She quit from the movie domain and just educate her children as well as help her husband in housework. So the time problem could be solved by this method.
Although I agree that there may be a serious of phenomenons to parents are invloved less in their children\\\'s education. I feel that the opposite is more obvious. Hence, I firmly believe that parents are more involved in children\\\'s education.


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