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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>Education in modern society becomes more utilitarian than in the past. Individuals\\\' believe that receiving a good education guarantees a promising future, which means people  are supposed to be educated since a young age. Thus, parents play an important role in childs\\\' teaching. It\\\'s undersatanable that most modern parents have a stronger desire to get involved in their children\\\'s education which is rarely happend in the past,such as making decisions about which kingdergarten their babies should go, pushing them to laern instruments like piano and voilin that barely intrigues their interests and which subject they should major in to get a great profit when they begin to work.
It\\\'s legetimate that parents did such things nowadays.With the development of technology, there are more approaches for them to participate in their childs\\\' education.For instance, when I was a little boy and my mother often contact with my teachers of several subjects.She just need to send a message, and my teachers would tell her my learning conditions, which annoyed me a lot in the past.
In addtion, parents\\\' concern is not the only reason for the phenomenon. The family conditions in the past was much worse than modern society. Youths became mature earlier, that is to say they often had ability to make decisions for themselves. Rather, modern youngsters is incapable of being independent. They need their parents\\\' to make choice for them. We can\\\'t deny that parents got more experience in life than us, so if we can\\\'t make sure our decisions are right, it\\\'s acceptable for them to get involve in our education.
Last but not least, in a materialistic world, parents had a wish that their child could rose all the way and more competitive than others. This is because in modern society, it will cost much to step on a wrong way.Parents\\\' involvments are no doubt helpful. Whereas, society in the past is a relatively noncompetitive one compares to nowaday\\\'s.
All in all, it\\\'s clearly that parents today are more involved in kids\\\' education. It derives from their love for their children. Meanwhile, it\\\'s also a reflection of this utilitarian world.


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