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Some people think that we should keep awayfrom others to improve our relationship, because being away from people remindsus of how important they are. Others think we should always stay with others tohave good relationship because we can communicate with them more often. What doyou think?

In modern society, people are struggled fora better life. As a result, keeping a good relationship with friend in order tocommunicate with each other becomes an useful way to release pressure. Somepeople think that keeping away from others is a good way to improverelationship. However, in my opinion, staying together with friends frequently isa better way to maintain friendship because they can communicate to each other.
First, staying together and communicatingregularly with others make people familiar with each other’s personality, whichis essential to develop relationship. Ways people talking reflects his realcharacters and we could understand other’s personality comprehensively throughcommunication instead of a simple impression left when we first met others. Ifthey have some same characters, they will have a great relationship soon. Forexample, when my friend Megan became an internship in a company, shecommunicated with her senior manager frequently. As a result, her manager startedto familiar with her soon and realized that they both are quiet but kindpeople. Naturally, this senior manager maintain a relationship with my friendinstead of other internship.
Second, a strong sense of trust produced inthe process of communications will develop a relationship. According tostatistic data, when people knows most of events happened in other’s life, hewill have an illusion that he had familiar with that person for a long time anddevelop a sense of trust. As a result, relationship developed naturally. Forexample, after I met my roommate, we talked about our experience in childhoodwith each other every night. After knew her personal life, I had a strong feelthat I had acquainted with her and a sense of trust. As a result, we became bestfriend soon.
Third, although being away from othersmakes people realize importance of others, having little connection with otherscauses a serious strangeness about other’s daily life. When they meet again,they will not have any common topic, which will damage to their friendship. Forexample, Amy and Lily were best friends during senior high school. Aftergraduated, Amy chose to go to college in another province while Lily found ajob locally and they had little connection with each other during four years.When Amy comes back home and meet Lily again, they have no similar topic sinceAmy talks about her academic study and Lily complains about her job. As aresult, their friendship disappears gradually.
In brief, I agree with the statement thatpeople should stay together and communicate with each other frequently to developand maintain relationships.

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