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Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.In a rapidly developed society with a fast pace, nowadays individuals could get access to abundant information from the website. Some people stress that with the advent of information age the role of teachers is marginally replaced by applications or software, while others suggest that the teachers are still valued and appreciated in fundamental education. However, in my perspective, teachers are still valued and appreciated by society as that in the past.

First and foremost, even if a wide range of knowledge and courses are available on the website, teachers virtually play a primary role in education and research in university. In other words, for majority of the people, the most direct way to acquire knowledge is still to enter into a traditional school instead of online courses. In this case, a teacher embraced with enough teaching techniques and knowledge are extremely appreciated and valued. For example, in my university, we are offered with both online courses and traditional courses produced by our respected professors and teaching assistants. As a matter of fact, all the online courses are elective courses although there are various kinds of them. What\\\'s more, our professor would like to oversee our projects and provide us with practical and advantageous suggestions of our study and life. Apparently, we can make it clear that teachers are still appreciated and valued by society.

Next, teachers or professors establish a profound influence on the technology development of our society. It is the science and technology that lay a solid foundation of our society. As you can see, every year, there are a large number of highly educated students graduated from universities and everyone of them would become the building block of our country. Without the continuous efforts and persistent dedication of the teachers, the development of our country and society would be a castle in the air. The success of Jack Ma is a case in point, who is the co-founder of the biggest e-commerce company, Alibaba. He once lived in a remote countryside in eastern China, but he is well-educated. There is no doubt that during his education experience, his teachers had imperceptible effect on him and broadened his horizon. Jack Ma’s success is due perhaps half to his endeavor, and perhaps half to his teachers. Therefore, the value of teachers would not be taken precedence over by other things and they are greatly appreciated.

By and large, regardless of the truth that increasing number of knowledge could be obtain from the website, the importance of teachers could not be replaced and they are appreciated and valued as that in the past.


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发表于 2018-6-14 14:16 |显示全部楼层
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