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Question:Question: Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.The lecture claim that thoughthe reason for why  the animal became extinct is unknow now, however the three theories given by the reading passage is not true as well, his refute what the reading passage proved.

the lecture claim that the sea cow is a kind of massive creature, the population of the native siberian people is not very large at that time which means that they don\\\'t need to catch and hurt the large mount of the sea cow, which refute the reading passage that the sea cows may have seen overhunted by the groups of native siberian people.

the lecture claim that it is not cause by the ecosystems disturbances and also it not cause the decline of the food as well. when the native go out to get something to eat they didn\\\'t report anything, they are just fine and not suffer from the food shortage which against the reading passage that the extinct pf the population was cause by the ecosystems disturbances that caused a decline in their main sourse of food

the lecture claim that the population of the sea cow was less than the current, which means that before the european came to the island (before 1741) is very small, the tendency of the quality was decreasing before european came to this area. refers that this was not the ain cause ,but also the european was not the first person who came to this island which oppose to the reading passage\\\'s viewpoint that the main cause of the extinct of the sea cows was the european who as a trader and came to the iland after 1741.


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