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Nowadays, there are more and more peopleconsider their job satisfaction, they think they are happy with working is mostimportant. In my opinion, some factors contribute to job satisfaction, thoughwe may not able to satisfy all employees.
When it comes to what make workers happy,high salary must play an indispensable role. One reason is that people can raisetheir living standard by money. So people are willing to devote themselves onworking if they have enough wages in return. Therefore, money means a lot tojob satisfaction.
What's more, job prospect is significant tomany people. It is normal that everyone like to go a workplace having wellpromotion systems and brilliant future. For example, people try their best to beadmitted in Internet companies because we can see a bright future that newtechnology like AI and big data are likely to be everywhere in the future.Joining an Internet company means we will get more opportunities to reach ourlife goal. If we work in a workplace without good change, we will not feelhappy.
But it is impossible for everyone to meettheir own job satisfaction, because different people have different job expectationand life goals. For instance, two men work in a same place with same wage, oneof them expect to be a CEO one day, and the other prefer to stay where he isnow. So the former will never feel content until he becomes the CEO, and theother will happy because earning such level of salary and working in such aplace is enough for him. Therefore, it is hard to meet everyone's standards.
In conclusion, despite those two factors,there are other factors affect job satisfaction, though we maybe feel sad whenwe are not working in an ideal position, we should be positive to our future,choose the right way and keep going in order to meet our life goals.

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