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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Friendship is one of the most important factors for a human being to develop a happy life. Although some people might believe that the ability to make friends easily can resolve in more happiness than having a small number of friends for a long time. I personally agree with the prompt that it is more important to maintain friendships with a small number of people.

To begin with,  friends dated back long tend to understand us more. As the saying goes: " A friend in need is a friend in need". To achieve a delightful life, we have to overcome the obstacles in life. And it is our best friends that understand us so well that they not only know how to deal with our problem but also know how to handle it properly in order to not hurt our feeling. For instance, when students at school facing math problems, they tend to ask their classmate for help. Those who are good-old friend with the student will react in a way that does not adversely affect the student's self-esteem. In contrast, if the student goes to a friend that is easily made and not with a deep connection, they may feel embarrassed or humiliated owing to the response of the friend.

Secondly, friends trace back long have a more solid connection with us so that they will put us in first priority. To acquire friends easily, it necessarily means that they will become friends easily with other people as well. Hence, when we needed to be accompanied or someone to talk to, these individuals may not be there for us because they are occupied by some other friend of theirs. However, if we maintained a friendship for a long time, these friends will make time for us first even if they are busy with their works or other friends due to the fact that we are more important. Therefore, an easily-made friend can never achieve the same outcome.

True, some people might claim that having more easily-made friends can sometimes be helpful when we required some advice on a certain task or for certain knowledge. Everybody is good at something, so to know more people lead to more chance of solving different field of questions. However, with the convenient internet system modern day presented, it is not so hard to find solutions online. In addition, if we make friends only to seek resources in solving issues, they might not want to be friends with us anymore. On the contrary, if we develop a robust relationship with our old friends, we will try to help each other without question. So, it is better to maintain a solid friendship

With the reasons mentioned above, I believe that people need to focus on the small number of friends they developed if they desire more happiness for their life.

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