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Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The enviorntment has become more vulnerable because a large number of trees have been cut and factories exhaust gases and so on.The purpose of these behaviours is to pursue more profits, so some people reckon that local people should be responsible for the local environment instead of intervening by the government. I think that local residents should take some actions to protect the environment and the government can provide some support.

Local people are directly related to the environment of the areas where they live in. Many people are not aware that there are many environmental problems are lifestyle-related, so they are less likely to change behaviours. For instance, many old people prefer to use the plastic bags in the supermarkets rather than use some enviromentally friendly bags as they do not realise that these palstic garbage will damage the land. In additoion, some citizens usually drive a car to travel to and from work in order to save their time but the emission affect the air quality. If the local people can change some of their life habits,many environment problems can be alleviated in certain degree.
The government can offer some guide and support to the pubilc in terms of environmental protection. It is difficult for indivisuals to deal with some pollution issues. For example, factoires possiblly to pour the pollutains into the rivers in order to reduce the manufacturing cost,which will influence the water adversely and are likely to lead to some healthy problems to the public. In this case, the government can take some measures to prevent this behaviour, such as introducing laws and imposing a fine.
In conclusion, local peole are able to make many contributions to taking care of the environment and the government can also give some help to the public.

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发表于 2018-6-12 11:52 |显示全部楼层
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