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发表于 2018-6-10 21:00 |显示全部楼层
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题目:People believe arts like painting and music dose not directly improve the quality of life ,and therefore they think governments’ should be spent on other things . To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, there are more and more galleries and concert are free of admission fees with the governments’ fund, but some people think this way dose not have no effect on enhancing people’s life quality and the authorities should pour money in other aspects.
Those people who hold a view that arts dose not directly improve the life quality believe that some paintings, like abstract paintings and modern painting, cannot be understood by normal people, because most people do not have professional knowledge about drawing, even they visit the galleries, they probably pretend to be associated with arts in order to keep up to the date with fashion. As the same reason for people who tend to go concerts. Thus, arts especially for those need deep understanding , are useless for  most people improving life quality in the short term.

Therefore, the governments can invest money on other aspects which are easily accepted by the mass, such as dancing, cooking and arranging the flowers and so on. Those activities can be held in the communities and people can learn these skills quickly and easily with the teachers ‘guidance. Besides, the community can invite some artists have lectures about paintings and music, which can assist people to gain fundamental knowledge of and gradually interest in these arts.
In conclusion, I maintain that arts probably play an important role in people’s spiritual life for minor people, but  governments’ should pay more attention on some infrastructures which everyone can understand easily.

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发表于 2018-6-12 11:32 |显示全部楼层
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