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[老师已改] 电脑游戏是无害的娱乐,也是有益的教育工具

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题目是Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
正文:Many people,especially children and teenagers,enjoy playing video games.Some people regard it as a harmful tool,while some people believe that computers games can be used as a educational tool.From my point of view,the drawbacks of video games overwhelm its advantages.
On the one hand,video games can be entertaining and educational at the same time.From the leisure perspective,they can relax well and have a good time after playing video games,and experience marvellous virtual worlds with VR glasses, the newest technology.From the educational perspective,these games inspire imagination and creativity,as well as concentration,logical thinking and the ability to solve problems,and all these skills could help you become a better man.Futhermore,computer games could also increase GDP of a country.For instance,Leauge of Legends,one of the most popular games in the world,brings countless money to many companies and quite a few countries,and also promote a series of relevant industries.
On the other hand,I would argue that the benefits are outweighed by its drawbacks.Gaming could be highly addictive,because users usually compare their scores to others,attarcting them to keep playing by new targets and frequent rewards.Many children and teenagers now spending hours per day try to beat their friends or get a higher level of their characters.In order to finish the goal of games,quite a few children would stay up late playing games.Lack of sleep could lead to a series of consequences,such as ,they couldn’t finish their homework on time and concentrate energy on classes.Countless students drop out from schools because their addiction in games,and,recent studies show that the rise in obesity has also been linked to the unhealthy life styles and lack of exercise is formed by the addition in games.
In conclusion,it seems that the potential dangers of eletronic games are more significant than the possible benefits.



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