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The bar chart compares the average houseprices in year 1989 and years ranging from 1990 to 1995 in five differentcities, New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt and London.
On the one hand, the figures showed thatthe average house prices both in London and Tokyo witnessed dramatic decreasewith 8% between year 1990 to 1995; and following these two countries was New York,with a less significant decline about 5% during the same period. However, theextra two cities, Madrid and Frankfurt, increased by 2% and 3% respectivelyover the same period.
On the other hand, in the following years,some cities exprienced dramatic changes when compared with the former data. For example two cities, New York andTokyo, underwent opposite trends from the year 1996,with significant increaseby 5% and 12% respectively , while the Tokyo still stayed in an decreasedstatus, though the decrease was less with about 5% afterward. When it comes to the city Madrid, it kept an rising trendand the growth percentage was nearly 5%, andthe increment was less in Frankfurt, withonly 2% at the same time.
Overall,in the year ranging from 1996 to 2002, only Tokyo kept in a declining trend,other four cities all increased more or less at the end.

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