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Some people think that schools should focuson academic subjects like algebra, history, and physics, but others think thatschools should spend time focusing on practical skills like time management andbanking. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It has been claimed that academic subjectsshould be put more emphasis in schools while others consider schools should putvalue on practical skills. My view is that it is better for schools to attachequal importance to academic study and practical skills.
On the one hand, academic subjects likealgebra, history and so on are beneficial to students’ professional fields inthe future. Learning various academic lessons help students find theirinterests and lay a foundation for the major they will choose in the future. Interms of mathematics, it is the basic knowledge of a variety of social sciences,such as economics and finance. If one wants to be an accountant or an engineer,it is necessary for him or her to learn math well. Besides, one’s ability in logicaland abstract thinking can also be developed when he or she is solving mathquestions. Arts subjects like history and languages can bring students knowledgeabout their own culture and improve their ability of mobilizing words.
On the other hand, developing practicalskills like time management and banking make students acquaint with social activitiesand manage themselves better. In school, learning some practical skills thatcan be used in life in the future can broaden students’ scope of knowledge andreceive well-rounded education. For example, they are able to work with peersand behave sensibly and they can learn financial literacy and how to manage theirtime to work more efficiently. These knowledges play an important role in one’ssocial like, especially in one’s personal development and social relationships.
In conclusion, I believe that schoolsshould not only pay attention to academic courses, but also attach importance topractical skills.

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