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发表于 2018-6-13 22:00 |显示全部楼层
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Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.   I disagree with the statement.In comtanporary society.More and more people prefer to do their own things without notice anthing about the world.I definetly support this action.
   First of all,you cannot focus on the aspect that you have to do if you spent time on these things that none of your business.Normally,aspect which can attract the whole world must be very fascinating.Thus,once you pay attention on it,you will cannot control yourself to know more about it.That\\\'s the reason why time is passing so swiftly.
   Futhermore,once you know about those things,your thinking is out of your control.You cannot stop yourself from thinking those things.Because of this,you may feel very tired.For you not only have to controll yourself to not thinking those things,but also have to do your own things.Thus,people can easily feel too exshaust to do other things.
   In addition,if you were attraciton by the things like the World Cup or NBA.You may indulge yourself to spent money on it.As long as you are addicted with it,this will be abundant of spending.And this will be a heavy spending for some people.
   In conclusion,you don need to notice the things that none of your business.Just do your own things and focus on it.Divert one\\\'s attention is a very terrible things.Even if you look this as a habbit,the loss for you is not only just time,but also your moneyand your thinking.In my opinion,pay attention to the things that celebrated from the world is useless and meaningless.


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发表于 2018-6-16 12:26 |显示全部楼层
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同学你好,练习已由外教老师批改,结果如下:
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