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发表于 2018-6-14 09:02 |显示全部楼层
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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>At university and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and should receive equal financial support.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>  While many people may just focus on their study at university, I strongly suggest that sports and social activities are just as important as classes and should receive equal financial support. In my view, university is anything more than studying all the time, but more about self-development, for we can benefit a lot from it. Here follow my reasons.
  To start with, we can be both phisical and mental healthy. For instance, by doing sports, we can make our body strong and thus we will be in good health. It is the same when we are taking part in the social activities. We try do communicate with others and take measures when we are in disagreement. By doing so we know how to get along with others. Therefore, sports and social activities provide us with a good chance to become healthier.
  Also, sports and social activities help us to learn cooperation. Sports like basketball call for cooperation and team-work. It is impossible to win a game without other teammates\\\' help. So when we attend sports competitions or social activities like this, we will get to know the importance of team-work. Besides, taking part in these activities will help us make new friends. If we do a good job, we laugh together, and if we do not behave well we can also encourage each other to do it better next time. Through this we can make good friends and develop friendships with others.
  Finally, we are able to broaden our horizens when taking part in sports and social activities. If we just concentrate on study in unversity or college, we will probably just know things from textbook. However, college life is anything more than books, it is more about practice. When dealing with certain activities, we are also developing our skills as well as broaden our horizens.
  In a word, I hold the opinion that sports and social activities are just as important as classes and should receive equal financial support.


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