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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>Recently, the debate over the controversial statement that educating children become more and more difficlut today than in the past has become more and more intense among the public. A handful of people maintain the idea that this statement is true, while others take issue with them and believe that educating children is easier in contemporary society tan in the past. However, I, personally, inclined to the side with the later view, I will elaborate my point in the following paragraphs.

The principal argument in favor of my view is that children can get education easier in school than in the past, which means they can easier get education. According to a research from New York university, the percentage of children who have take the education at school has increased almost 40 percent since ten years ago. We all know that it was difficult for childs to get education at school except they are born in a rich family. Because the costs for child to get in to school are unafforded for most family in the past. Take my grandpa as an example, My grandpa only studied in school for one year because my family at that time can\\\'t afford such a cost. However, for me, in contemporary society, If we want, everyone can get education in school because the cost of get into school is much lower than that of in the past. The things now we concentrate on is how to get into a better school instead of how can I get into a school.

Another point that we should consider is that for morden children, they can learn everywhere, which means they can get education easier than in the past. Thanks for internet, children can learn things from online classes without go to the  school. And also, children can get free lecture from university now. Take myself for instance, I am a person who really interested in computer science, but my senior school haven\\\'t have that subject. As a solution, I went the Amoy university every sunday to listen to a free lecture about computer science. In the past, we know that we can\\\'t imagine such class right?

Admittedly, it is indisputable that children spend a lot of time on cell phone, online game or other amusement technologies should not be neglected. However, from my point of view, children can also be educated from these technologies. From online games, they can not only improve their creativity but also can improve their critical thinking ability. From social networking Web site, they can know plenty of things about the world, which means it can broaden their horizen. Also, social ability is improved by using social networking Web site.

To put it into a nutshell, educating children is easier today than in the past not only because they can get education in the school easier bu also because they can learn everywhere.


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