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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>Nowadays, because of the rapid development of the world, people can meet a lot of differnet people in their daily life, and make friends more easier than before. But it becomes difficult to maintain a friend for a long period time. However, I think maintaining a small number of friends over a long period of time is more important than the ability to make many new friends easily.
First of all, long period friends have stronger loyalty. Because you experience a lot of things in such a long period togather, and you trust each other most. So, they will have little possibility to betrey you. But for the new friends, you do not know them well, and they will decieve you in some things, if this is good for them.
Secondly, the friends that you know for a long time will have much more understanding for you. Because they know all the things that you like or dislike or the reasons that you do something by some ways. They will always support you with no reasons. Unlike them , the new friends may feel confused when you do something not in the regular methods. For instance, I have a habit that I will be really nervous to run for the sport meeting although I can run really fast and always get the first prize. My best friend Emily knows it well and always companys with me before the sports meeting and helps me to relax. But some of the new friends just can not understand it.
However the ability to make a lot of new friends easily is also important. In that way, you can get a great amount of new ideas from them. But to compare with the old friends who know you best, I do not think that will be much attractive to me. On contrary, we can learn some thing new togather with my best old friends.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that the ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period time is more important for happiness than the ability to make new friends easily.


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发表于 2018-6-21 15:14 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2018-6-22 05:59 |显示全部楼层
只是来看一下改后的成果来学习的
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