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Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.The role of teacher played in eduction has always been significantly emphasized. However, it has been controversial whether teachers nowadays are not as appreciated compared to those in the past. Personally, I firmly believe that present teachers absolutely take more important responsibilties, thus being more valued.

To begin with, teachers are more specialized nowadays, which menas they are relatively performig better within thier own fields. As a mother, a neighbor of mine once said that thanks to his swimming teacher and piano teather, my son had been well adapted to various useful skills after professional training. It is clearly noticed that a variety of teachers engaging in different field is rapidly appearing. With expertise and practical experience in the profession they are cultivating their students, they are absolutely better than the teachers in the past who are normally criticized for lack of former education.

In addition, the value people place on education is rapidly increasing. Especially for the manager of a advanced company , the development of human resource proves to be insightful as the working capability of an empolyee would be considerably stronger after cultivation. AS a resuly, because teachers play an indispensable roles in education,their status, comparing to the status of thier past counterparts, is tremendously higher. In sum, the increased emphasis on eduction provides teachers nowadays with better recognition.

Granted, it is argued that the apparent trend of self-studying, helped by enhanced technology, lowers the value of teachers. To the contrary, the reality tells its own story. In fact, it is observed that relatively, class holds less students than it did in the past, implying n more significant reponsibilty taken by teachers. With the introductive role aiming to explore the complete potential of students, teachers are definitely being more valued since this type of work can never be done by machines.

In a nutshell, because of enhanced specializtion in profession, augmented value placed on education as well as the significant emphasis on personal development explored by teachers, their societal value is believed to increase rapidly and exceed the value placed on teachers in the past.


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