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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>Young people enjoy life more than older people do.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>In contenporary society,much ink has been spilled out for the question that whether young people enjoy their life more than older people do.Such assertion,however,is torned into pieces by others.As for as I concerned the statement that young adults nowadays enjoy their life more than their older counterparts do is arbitary and one sided because it fails to take all related circumstances into consideration.We should analyze the statement comprehensively before drawing the conclusion.

First and foremost,it is incorrect to judge that young people enjoy their life more than older people.We have to admit the fact that young people nowdays have more access and knowledges of technologies and comtemporary medias then their older counterparts do which could help them enjoy their life.But we should not take into account to the fact that the older generations have their own enjoyment which some young peopel could not understand.Take my grandparents as example,they are both in their 70s and do not have much knowledge of internet or social medias as my generation do,they could not easily access to the board space of entertainment on the internet nor enjoy the benefit of social media.However,they have their own unique way of enjoying their life which people of my generation could not duplicate.As a died-heart fan of the traditional Chinese chess,my grandpa greatly mastered it and deeply enjoy the time of playing it.He had dozens of friend who he like to play the chess with,and as far as I can tell he enjoyed every moment of playing the chess with his friends.Whereas my grandma is a master on kniddle works,she often spend her free time working on kniddling clothese or accessories for our family.She appeared to having fun while she works on his kniddle,and I believed that such entertainment she gained from her hobby is unique and indispensible to her.Both my grandpa and grandma have their own unique way of enjoyment,while at the mean time these hobbies and access to relexation is what people of my generation could never possess:there\\\'s rarely any young people I know could play well on the chess while none of them know how to do kniddle work.Despite the fact that older people may not have access to some of the contemporary way of enjoyment,they have their own way at the same time,such enjoyment is excluded to young people of nowadays.

In addition to their own way of enjoyment,older people are also able to have more time of their own for relexation whereas young people are constantly need to deal with stress on studying and work.My uncle Bing and his daughter Linda is a perfect example for the difference between young and older generation.Linda,a college graduate,who had just entered the world of adults has to deal with all kinds of stress:stress from her work,pressure to maintain herself financially and other social stress such as the need to seek for a partner.Whereas my uncle Bing,a man in his 60s,have already retired from his work and live at home while receving retirement pansion each month.I can easily tell that there is not such thing as stress for him,he do not have to get up early for work or worring about the financial problem of his family.He have all of his time at his disposal which he could use to travel,read book,sleep in or whatever he\\\'s pleased to.While at the same time the abundant retirement pansion enable him to all kind of lesiure practices with out worrying about the financial situation.Therefore it is not hard to tell who\\\'s able to enjoy his/her life more,Linda or Bing?

In conclusion,it is incorrect and unfair to judge young people enjoy their life more than older people do.While young people indeed have more access to way that could help them enjoy life,we should also take into account the fact that older generation as well have their own way of enjoyment and that they have less stress on life then the young people do.The issue is complex and required a case by case analysis,we should not disregard situation where the statement is unjustifiable.As the result,I disagree with the statement that young people enjoy their life more than older poeple do.


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