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Question:Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea?  In today\\\'s society, education became an important topic for many parents, for they wanted their children to have better academic success and better future. There are many ways for parents today to encourage their children to get high grades. Some parents choose to offer their children money when they get high grades so that they will be motivated and work hard. However, offering money may not be a good way to help school-age children because it will eventually led to children\\\'s cheating on exams and worng values.
  To begin with, children\\\'s goal at school will turn into getting high grades only on exams if their parents use money as rewards for high grades. When these children desire higher grades on their exams, studying harder on their daily classes may not be the only way. If a student did not perform well on exams in the past, the chance that they will work hard is small. They may even started to think of ways to cheat on their exams so that they can get their rewards without working so hard. As a result, using money as a reward for high grades may cause children\\\'s bad behaviors like cheating on exams instead of children\\\'s williness of studying harder.
  Another reason to claim the disadvantage of this method is that offering money may led to children\\\'s wrong values. If parents use money as a way to motivated their children, their children may think that the purpose of studying at school is to get rewards form their parents. Unlike those students who know that gaining academic success will led to better life and better fortune, students who are motivated by rewards like money do not understand the ture value of studying. On one hand, they may not study so well as those who are willing to study. On the other hand, they are very likely to stop learning when their parents stop offering money. That\\\'s why offering money is not a good idea when children are forming wrong values.
  In short, offering school-age children money for their high grades is not a good idea because of the forming of bad behaviors like cheating and the forming of wrong values. To really encourage children to study hard and get high grades, parents should think of better ways to make them willing to study on their own. In that way, children can really get better academic improvements.


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