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Question:Question: Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.Both the reading passage and the lecture are talking about the possible benefits and costs of genetic modified trees. The reading passage provided three benefit of it. However, the professor in the lecture makes strong agrument to negate the supporting argument in the reading passage.

The first point claimed by the reading passage is that the genetic modified trees is hardier than nature trees, therefore they are  more likely to survive in some natural disasters. It provided an example that the modified trees successfully solved the red spot problem in Hawaii. However, the professor in the lecture disagree with the point made in the reading passage. She claims that the idencal feature of modified trees with leads it totally being wiped out by some of the disaster like climate change. In contrast, nature trees are not uniform and very likely to have some surviviors after a disaster. Therefore, the professor concludes the first point made in the passage is not convincing.

The second point made by the reading passage is that, economic benefits will be brought by there fast-growing trees. No, says the professor, farmers should pay a large amount of money to the company in order to get the seed. This fact directly negates the second point.

What is more, the reading passage also stated the overexploitation of wild trees will be avoided, for the modified trees are good substitutes of the natural trees. Saying that the agressive-growing modified trees will lead to more damage to our trees, for it will compete with natural trees for living sources. Therefore the last point is also not convincing in the passage.





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