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Question:Question: Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.The lecture completely refutes the reading passage. The reading material holds that humpback whales use the stars at night as a tool of navigational marking over long distance. However, the lecture standes that the supporting details in the reading are not very convincing.

Firstly, the author highlightes that humpback whales are highly intelligent that they can use the stars as a sign for navigating, because they have a extremely high degree of complexe brain. They are able to utilize the sensory stimuli to follow the stars. On the contrary, the professor states that there are no connecttion between high intelligence and the ability to use stars. Lots of other animals such as ducks are also able to use this strategy, but ducks are not highly intelligent. It might just be there instinck to do such things, because ducks doesn\\\'t have a overall intelligent than whales.

Secondly, the reading passage states that the humpback whales are traveling in straight lines, which they can only do that with a external forces. The other example is the birds, they use actual landmarks to guid them, so that in the ocean, the stars guid the whales. On the other hand, the listening material argues that the whales actually are able to sense some external sighs such as the earth magnitive field. They have the ability to use their brain to sense this and  follow the maginitive field to guid their journey.

Finally, the reading believes that humpback whales always spy-hopping which the mive their head upward for minutes and looking at the stars above. However, the lecture believes the reading material does not hold water because there are other animals like sharks to do the same thing, but sharks does not look for hunting or even nevigate. Furthermore, the whales often spy-hopping during the day, which they can bare see stars. The ideas from the lecture are really poor spequlation.


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